rate_review Reviews

Interesting story. I like the interaction between Inu and Miroku. Over all I would give it a 4 out of 5. The only things that keep it from the 5/5 are: 1)I can't see Sesshoumaru letting himself become involved with the kind of people that Naraku got involved with in this story. He doesn't see the sadistic kind in this story. 2)Everything ended so soon. What happened after the police took the boys away? How did Miroku deal with the aftermath. Were Inu and Miro able to be together afterwards and were they able to be intimate again?

Oh, and BTW, thanks for writing for us to read!

Caitriona

great story!!

I'm really suprised on how you decided to end this. I thought for sure there would be atleast 20 chapters to the story. It seems so unfinished to me. It started out great and the ending just seemed rushed. Oh well, I guess thats what happens when a author doesn't like their story. Wasn't it the reason you stopped? Oh well I still give you alot of 10s. ^.^. Later, I hope your next one turns out awesome!

Chapter 1:

Okay, why am I getting a strange flashback to "Chicago"?

aww poor Miroku,so is Naraku done with him will Inu ever find out that Mirkou slept with Naraku?

Poor, poor Miroku..Naraku is such a jerk for using Miroku that the way he did. Anyways gr8 chapter, i loved it! :) :) Can't wait to read more.

That was oh so good, i just love yaoi fanfics about Inuyasha and Miroku, and i especially love the part when they were doing the deed, lol. Anyways that was such an excellent chapter. Can't wait to read more, so please update real soon. :) :)

please update soon very good