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for Lemon Lake

by dragonflyelj

person RuriRuri
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooooow that was GOOOOOOOOOD!!! hahha i DID leave it up to my imagination and thus it was the best story EVER. hahaha keep up the good work u got goin! GREAT job! it was pretty hott.
person Chigirl
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh-That can't be the end?!!!! I love this story and it's a shame because you won't be updating!!! Please reconsider making this a multi chapter or atleast make a part two
person Chigirl
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot!! You should do a prequeal and sequeal! Like most I usually dont review onshots, but i want to see more!
person awwwwww....
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was REALLY good