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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story was perfectly written and had a lot of what id expect and like to see in those who write fan fiction and none of the characters persona differed from the anime; with that said with such unknown as to
what more could take place in the story I find it to be such a tragic waste of talent for this story to not be continually updated till it's complete.
I ever so hope you find time to finish it, you have such promise in which direction your able to take this story.
what more could take place in the story I find it to be such a tragic waste of talent for this story to not be continually updated till it's complete.
I ever so hope you find time to finish it, you have such promise in which direction your able to take this story.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good so far but PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. I think I like this story. It show's Rin's conception of honor, I got to see Sesshomaru's stepping into Edo, and having his hair described! What more could I ask for? YET, that is. ~_^
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first three chapters of this are really good sounding. I am really interested in finding out how this goes. Please keep writing this story.
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome first story so far! I love it and can't wait for you to update. hope ya update soon.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok!
It looks pretty good.
My only question is what did you mean with the kick-ass ending? I hope it does not mean a bad one. The storry seems to be nice and for your first fic it is very good written as well as the plott is interesting. Please write me if you have time what did yoou mean by the ending, I don´t won´t to know what happens, only if it is bad, because I am bearing such things not very well.
Thank you and take care
Linda
PS.: If the mail is not working please send try to masurova@lycos.de, only if you have time to write back, it will be enoufg not bad ending or bad ending, thanks again
It looks pretty good.
My only question is what did you mean with the kick-ass ending? I hope it does not mean a bad one. The storry seems to be nice and for your first fic it is very good written as well as the plott is interesting. Please write me if you have time what did yoou mean by the ending, I don´t won´t to know what happens, only if it is bad, because I am bearing such things not very well.
Thank you and take care
Linda
PS.: If the mail is not working please send try to masurova@lycos.de, only if you have time to write back, it will be enoufg not bad ending or bad ending, thanks again
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay...Ok so now update.
Please?
Please?
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for next CHAP!
You better update or else....
I'll shred thousands of tomatoes, i mean onions in front of your very eyes>.<
hahahahaha!*walks away with the back of her hand covering her mouth*
Ja ne!
You better update or else....
I'll shred thousands of tomatoes, i mean onions in front of your very eyes>.<
hahahahaha!*walks away with the back of her hand covering her mouth*
Ja ne!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey- I really love your story. The character portrayals are very accurate! It’s a very pleasing fic to read, and I plan on following it till you’re finished writing. Thank you for such a great read! -Deziko =P
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and your portrayal of Sesshoumaru is right on.