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by DarkCrystalis

person Moon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God seriously what made you write something like that i mean its a lovely story i sssssssssooooooooooo love it but at the same time its pretty different from many other stories in a good way kkk no bad thought kkk so yeah and one small friendly request as a reader PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont kill kagome thatll be so sad and well i do realizy that you as the author wants to write about some thing different but still if its a possibility do not kill her i mean inu would be sooooo sad and yeah i mean the whole story will be way to sad for me to take really lol im way to dramatic lol so yeah anyway its AWSOME please please please update as soon as you can.

P.S i really hope that this story has a happy ending lol did i forgat to mention that im a fairy tale happy ending freak lololol just kidding..... o_o NOT!

PeAcE aNd LoVe,

Ghost ^.^
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* good story.. but since it is from over a year ago, i am doubting my review will cause it to be finished.
person cyatal
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so sad kags got aids and kaede died that was said too but i'm glad she met inuyasha
person Havokgrl
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Last chapter was really sad...im in tears now :( *Sniff* Keep up the good work!
person Redlightspin
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so sad
person Lunar_storm
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg im about to cry over here you better update soon, god please update soon i just want him to know so bad
and i want there to be away for her to live i just want them to be together so please update soon ill bewatching allways
BK
person Blanca
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really sad. Very good job I hope you update soon.
person Foxfire911
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please post new chappie soon!
person Twilight
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD PLEASE WRITE MORE I REALLY WHAT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
person chanda
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a story so far, going to the doctors only to tell you have three days to live. I know Im going to need a tissue with this story. I wonder if thats how her mom died? the story is very original, and would love to read more.

Chanda