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by Ladyanimelover

person Go Elsewhere
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

They got the better of Sesshomaru.

Stupid baka, should have been paying more attention!

Lol, can't wait to see what's gonna happen next, because I was absolutely positively NOT expecting this. Couldn't keep the smile off my face the whole chapter because this surely means there's gonna be lots of angst to come.

I have no idea about kids running up and down hallways (I may have done that since I was the youngest, but I don't remember doing it, and I have absolutely no recollection of my elder siblings doing it either) but that was really cute and funny and sounded completely plausible for a three or two year old.

So what's going to happen next? Are they going to be with the wolves for a looooooong time, or is Inu Taisho going to rescue them right away? Or maybe he'll be killed, and then Inuyasha and Sesshomaru will have to grow up as wolves! The dogs of the wolf pack! ^_^
person Tryst
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guess what? I want you to update soon. Even though I'm new to this site, I like what I see. LOL.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT job! I really like this! I hope you update again soon! Damn Koga's father! He better keep his hands off Izayoi, Inu and Sessy!! Or else there'll be hell to pay!! Again, great job! Please update soon!

-DM
person Littlefiction
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. So scary, that a little 8 year old can maintain that cold facade constantly, when even his much older, more experienced father can only hold it while fighting or sparring.
person Demitria Miriam
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oo! I like this! It's so adorable! I can't wait to see what you've got planned for the next chapter! Great job! Update soon!!

-DM
person Rayne
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kodak moment!
aww...thats soo sweet*sniff sniff*
thats was awesome!
person monkeygirl
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice Intro to the fic, I can't wait to read more.
person strawberry
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lovely
person Deity
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Willy Wonka, huh? I myself go straight for the prize, Johnny Depp. Just kidding. I really liked this fisrt chapter and I really hope you continue on with it. I was just wondering, are you going to follow the series? I mean, like, having Inuyasha's mother and father die? Or is it going to be like... he grows up with a family? Anyway... keep up the good work and until chapter two is posted, Bye! ^_^
person D
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious to see what's going to happen next.
Good start! ^^
Write more soon please!