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for Taking Control

by tinak142

schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting story. im looking forward to reading more of it soon.
person ptbear
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read what happen to Kagome and how Hiei saves her.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sapphire
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell! You have to continue! What did Kagome see?!?! It better not be Brittany and Hiei ... together! I mean it! What will happen?!?! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! AND SOOOOOOON!!! Please!!!!
person boo
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u didn't update?!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person chaos
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!!!!!! its kinda coppy but I love the story line Please hurry up :>
person Sam
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thats sooooooo good, keep it up!!! :)
person seykitten
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done glad the writers block didn't stop you from writing this story cause its really great well done

Tamara Melton (Australia QLD)
person The Pink Fuzzy Elephant
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's alright I have writels block when it comes to my stroy on ff.net hopefully we'll both come out of it! ^__^