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by Trini

schedule June 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

PLEASE update & finish this soon; PLEEEEEAAASSEE!!!

schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE
person niko
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is a great story so far please write more. i love rin/sess stories. i hope somethin bad happens to his ex
person Kendra
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want more.... it was good.
person babe_galanime
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.
person Hunny bunny
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't that bad! I liked it!

But please use "Thes signs when someone speaks" and for example 'these signs when someone thinks' Okay?
person Akasakeme
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good idea you have there, but you should put quotation marks when someone speaks. I was so confused by the time I finished reading this.
person Ren
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee...another story? ^_^ Great story anyhows. Keep it up, ne? ^_^
person animegirl007
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good beginning.....keep it up...I can't wait for more!!!!!!