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I love this, I wish you would update:) No matter how long its been lol, I could really see a future for this book!!

loved the story there's not a whole lot naraku/kagome stories at least not as good as this one was

I love this story its just to bad there isn't a way for me to be alerted when you have the next chapyer up but please updaye soon.

I love the story, i never thought i'd really love a naraku/kagome story but i do! and its awesome! i really hope you don't plan on discontinuning it! please continue the story to the end!

whooop!
This is one the most interesting story I've come across!
You have to update, I wanna see where all this goes! I love it!

i love this story hope you update soon you are a goddess in my world of fanfiction love

Bella

Awwwww, Naraku be fallin' for Kagome. ^.^ Too cute! I love Naraku/Kagome pairings, and I have to say, this is one of my favourite stories with the two in it. Please update soon!

this is sweet, please update soon

I loved how we can continue at a part of the show instead of creating a similar situation like when the whole 'Kagome see's Inuyasha in the woods with Kikyo and runs into the arms of someone else' is overused. I like this much better. It was kind of boring though that you just filled the first chapter with all the dialouge from the episode. It's kind of like plagerism in a way, but I am still looking forward to reading what's next because i'm a Nar/Kag fan.

I don't see Naraku honestly taking pity on anyone and keeping them as servants as he does with Cho and Keiko, because as we seen in one of the episodes all his servants were dead when the castle's illusion wore off, but they will probably have a purpose to serve. I like how Naraku played with Kagome's head about Miroku and Sango though, because they can't always be there for her. But what was the point in recaping the first chapter if you just had Inuyasha fall for the same trick again, I thought it would have had an alternate ending or something.