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for The Final Fight

by SlopingRabbit

person pat
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SWEET cat fight LOL
wow nice i say death cause its always better knowing u dont have to face um again
anyway nice and plz contine
person nessie
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hell ya!
make clay potty die!!! MWUHAHAHA!!! ....okays im turning evil.....
anywayz, more kik bashings and inuyasha will be awake to join the fight!
perfect, and kagz is gnna be sooo tough and strong and just beat the s***
out of dead gurl!
GO KAGZ!!!!
person nessie
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah!
now tht's wat im talkin bout!
MAJOR KIKYO BASHINGS!!!!
this is going to be AMAZING!
finally kagz gets to kick some clay dumbo's @ss!!!!
this is a 5 out of 5 fic if you ask me!!!!
make it really brutal and kagz is gnna be like.....so cool!
it is a kik bashing fic right?
update soon! and yes, make the fic longer! waayyy longer! :)
person joy
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol wow sweet this is amazing icant wait to see that bitch go down

PS-- YAY!!! IM A SNUGGLEPIXIE!!!! lol buhhh byeee
person joy
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
....i got drunk and smoked a cinnamon stick... uuuuuuuuooooooooooooooogggghhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
person pat
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz contine PLz PLz PLz
its getting so good
PLZ ok im ready 4 another PLZZZZZZZZZZ
person inu hanyou nikkie
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot.. I think you have a great story going on... I only find it seems to moving a little too fast... I just have to get used to the Un-Kagome like swearing.. Which I gather she would start to do after being afound Inuyasha so much... As for the Fem_Dom... I DEFINITELY see that!! Inuyasha seems to bring it out in Kagome!! lol.. I can't wait for the next chapter... I hope it is a pretty long and seriously painfully ass kicking for Kikyou... I like her, but sometimes I just wanna see her ass kicked by Kagome.. and the remark about that time of the month lol!!! I wanna see Shippou get his ass kicked to by Sango!! please!! lol and Miroku!!!! I wonder will Kaede get into the ass kicking act?? lol!!! Please keep up the good work!!!
person Twilight
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes finally some one is going to kick her ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I can't wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person chanda
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh so close she going to give it to her good, cant wait...

Chanda
person inusailorcardcaptorluver
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was pretty awesome i luved it plese update soon