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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey in the second chapter that ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ is so long it messes up the formatting of the chapter and makes it hard to read. Think you could fix that so it is easier to read. I like the story BTW and look forward to the next chapters
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dog your story is soo cool so far this is one of my favorites please dont make it end soon this story MAKES ME SIT DOWN TURN LIGHTS OUT AND CHILL i like it THAT much dog i even have a freakin song playin to match( BTW im not wimpy...) the story its pimped out DONT STOP Kagome owns asss
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow shes dead
i want to know what happened to kagome
and i also want to read the rest of this storie
plz contine
i want to know what happened to kagome
and i also want to read the rest of this storie
plz contine
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES THE ****ER OF LIL GIRLIES IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO omg i cant wait for more!!! make more violent stories besides this plz weeeeeeeeeeeee
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute story. I love the thought of Kagome killing Kikyo. The only piece of advice I have is learn the difference between "except" and "accept". You like a lot of others use "except" when you should use "accept".
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my i love this story i'm glad that you wrote it. i think it was about time kikyo died in someone's fic.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chpt was really good. I can't wait until the lemon.
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW...ALSOME...SWEET...COOL and GRATE!!!! You can really tell that this story will ''KNOCK YOU OFF YOUR FEET'' (for real too!) I really hope that Kagome will kick Kikoy's ASS!!! and also hope there will be MUCH more to come.
P.S,
This will be really FUNNY if it happen in the show, I will be rolling my head off!!!
P.S,
This will be really FUNNY if it happen in the show, I will be rolling my head off!!!
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AM RIGHT ALONG WITH KAGOME I'LL KICK KIKYO ASS TOO DO YOU HEAR ME