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for The Final Fight

by SlopingRabbit

schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phantom story much! How exactly did you get your story published here without having it in your profile? Well anyway very good story although I think you made Kagome have anger issues, and I did not like the ending, three sentence finish is not good. Well JA NE
person weyrdkat
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Inu6,

But the last chapter sucked. . .it didn't fit with the story and it was just a hard to read jumble. Although there were a few type-os and a bit of bad formatting in the first chapters, they had a congruent theme and it was really funny to read as Kikyo got her ass handed to her and in the end was killed by the very thing she prided herself on.
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person dd
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool
person Rauko Arisha
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story kicked @$$!!!!!! i loved it . it kicks. please update and if you could let me know. thanks
person Little Jack 2
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add the lemon and ending soon,that was totally wicked how Kagome kicked that skanky kinky hoe's ass.
person Angelphire
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!!! The crazy whore is dead!
I loved this one. You are right, it was Kagome's right to fight her. She was awsome at it to. I really hope that you get the next chapter up some time soon. I loved it and I would love for you to finish it! =D
person alysia
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
person Silver Hanyou
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!! i read all 5 chapters so far and the story is fregin awesome!! i love that kikyo ho is finally dead ead!!! ^.^ great story, plus inuyashas got both caring and his usual big mouth style 2 him which is awesome!! ^_^ i love the story and don't really want it 2 end...but hope the lemons awesome!! i can tell u can definatly whip ^ a good 1 hehe.
person inufreak10210
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome ive been waittin fofr that crazy whore to die for like forever and i think you did the fighting very well it was awesome cant wait till the next chapter comes out