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Your story is getting really good, im anxious to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

I'm glad Ayame told Koga off. Unfortunately, he's taking his anger of Kagome's rejection out on Ayame. He's being a real bastard. I love it! It would be great though if Ayame restates to Koga "Now you know how I feel. To love someone only to never have that love returned." At some point, Koga needs to realize that and admit to what an asshole he's been. Or something like that. I dunno. I'm tired and rambling. Nice job. Looking forward to the next chapter.

well, i can already tell that your lemon is going to raise my temperture and I can't wait! One the characterizations, Kouga is a bit odd. Perhaps you could clarify that he went from being in love with kagome to being in happy lust with Ayame. If you could have kouga explain himself by saying or thinking of something, that would make his character...not better but more understandable. If, for example, he thought the matter over during that run to ayame's and have the run longer. Or he could talk it over with ayame when she asks about the kouga/kagome/inuyasha triangle conclusion. I don't know precisely but it's just a suggestion, not a flame. It's a good story adn I really like Ayame.

I like this alot, it's very interesting. Hope that you update soon.