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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first of all, GREAT STORY!!!!!! second, the mystery guy is inu and kags son...
schedule
January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is a good story. . . . i hope you update soon. this is a story that i would read. oh btw, you think of writing more ur chapters are real short.
~Dreamer
~Dreamer
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow nice begining and u could lead this somewhere nice
plz update so far it sounds good so i want to hear the rest
plz update so far it sounds good so i want to hear the rest
schedule
January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS ASOME YOU SHOULD UP DATE BUT IF YOU NEED FIVE THEN I NEED TO GET SOME OF MY FRIENDS TO READ AND THEN YOU WILL HAVE LOTS OF UP DATES (SO EVERYONE OUT THERE UP DATE HER SO WE CAN READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi this story is really good and is going to get even beter i hope you up date soon .......................................ps your chapter are really short later ^^
schedule
January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on just keep the chapters coming
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good but herry up with the next chapters HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule
January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good start make shore you update soon.
schedule
January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the idea need to see more chapters today