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for What did i do this time?

by bigdon2005

person Hannah
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story !!
person Ashley
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Your story is great and you are a good writer, but if this is supposed to be Inuyasha and Kagome COUPLING, I think you should at least make Inuyasha and Kagome kiss! Other than that though, you're pretty good, so keep up the good work!
person Ferral
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop now, I'm really getting into this story
person "fan of kagome" (now) cute mica
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you CAN not stop UPDATEING this story.
I mean please it’s great, and i love it *gets on her knees*
oh please oh please I’m begging you on
my hands, knees to finish it
*gives the sad kitty eyes* i love it honestly I really really do


TTFN;
megan
Ps: I’m changing my name to cute mica
person Emma
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!
person Obaasan
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I'm not a big fan of review or else I won't write. Believe it or not, this isn't a flame, just a simple comment.


Also, even though, I'm not a DBZ fan, I do find this story mildly interesting. Please update soon. I would like to see where you are taking this story. So few people finish their stories on here.
person inuyashaDreaGirl
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is good please update. . .
person anon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dont be mad a lot of ppl review when the story is done. that what they do for me. i really don't care how many reviews i get thoe. but please update im liking this story.
person moshinkabu
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update please!!!!!
person Keh...Whatever hanyou
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keh......this story is great!!!! Please update i want to know what happens when Inuyasha and Kagome meet there power level.