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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 -- Lame.. nonsence. I have been away from this story but I found it again.. It is great!
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying this.
it has a good, and original plot, at least one i've never read before.
there are some grammar and spelling errors, but nothing major. nothing that a beta or proof reading couldn't solve.
i look forward to the next chapter
it has a good, and original plot, at least one i've never read before.
there are some grammar and spelling errors, but nothing major. nothing that a beta or proof reading couldn't solve.
i look forward to the next chapter
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
Good story, I really like the lemons! ;)
A word of advice: you should look out for grammar mistakes and typos, there is quite a lot of them.
It doesn't change the fact that your story is great and you writing stile is enjoyable.
Good story, I really like the lemons! ;)
A word of advice: you should look out for grammar mistakes and typos, there is quite a lot of them.
It doesn't change the fact that your story is great and you writing stile is enjoyable.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KICKASS STORY!!!!!! YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story I hope you will update soon
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*growls and bites knuckles* damn you and your good ass story! made me friggen horny! :D please write more!! I love your story! keep it up!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it but i can't wait for the next chapter so hurry up bye
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. Please keep on updateing!! I really want to know what the forture (don't know if I spelled it right!) teller has to say to Inuyasha now!! I hope, wait a minute, I know Inuyasha has made the right choice by picking Kagome!! Keep on updateing!!!
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
It IS an interesting story, and I like your lemons so keep it going, it worths the wait!
Lynn
It IS an interesting story, and I like your lemons so keep it going, it worths the wait!
Lynn
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Even though I don't want to I will wait till friday to read the next chapter. Keep on writing please. XD