rate_review Reviews

HAHA okay i read this in your story. You had Inu no taisho as a Neko demon and not a Inu demon. If you hve something meant for that okay but i always thought he was a Dog not a Cat. Ironic isn't it. LOL

you have a lot of grammical problems in this chapter. I advice that you go and edit it. But good chapter i like it.

UpdaTE real soon please

The storyline you've got going here is a really interesting one, I'm enjoying it. And the interactions between Kagome and Sugmi are great. Some are not only funny but are cute too, like when the two were in the dojo. Though I think you'd really benefit from a beta reader or even just a second set of eyes to go through your work before posting. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes that made it a bit difficult to get as to what you were describing. And you might just want to take care when inputting the italic HTML code, just because I noticed you had jumped back to being with Kagome physically and not in her thoughts anymore yet the italics continued. Anyway, I hope you don’t take this the wrong way I am truly enjoying the story. Looking forward to more soon.

please update!!!

Plz more, loving the story.

oooooooh this is good!!!! keep going!!!!!!!!

Hey!
Great story so far but I was wondering...
is this story supposed to be InuTaisho/Kagome???
Please continue this story and please answer my question in your next chapter.
Thank You

Can't wait to read more so I hope you udpate asap please, and keep up the fantastic work.

I am very sorry, for what you are going through. I hope life gets better.