rate_review Reviews

it was a great one shot i absolutely loved it
and the ending as perfect

I loved it. Thankies <3 Well written <3!!

28 05 06
Wonderful idea you had to push Sesshoumaru to discover something else other than ice !! I loved that story. Keep writing !!! Thanks, and because I am French : gros baisers de France...

Merely Truth

That was cool. I liked this story alot. Good work!

Response: gd, thanks for your well-thought out review, but I wanted to point out two things. First, you stated that you really hoped to read more of my writing. That being said, you seem to have overlooked the fact that I DO have another recently-published oneshot under this name - Fading Away. Also, I agree that Kagome was a bit OOC since she is quite a spitfire. However, the fact that she had 15-20 years of marriage and child-rearing behind her would not necessarily make her less apt to respond to Sesshoumaru. I know too many 'good' women who after years of family life are...well, this response is long enough already.

Thanks again for your review, the mention that better plot might me me a more popular writer is neat! I'll keep trying.

You are a very talented writer and should continue. Your style is smooth and very pleasant to read.

Here are some critics: Kagome would never allow Sesshoumaru to have his way with her especially when she is happy with Inuyasha and has pups with him, it just doesn´t make sense. Even if she actually coulnd´t do anything against him she didn´t fight him at all. Kagomes character is very strong willed and she always fights back. It also doesn´t make any sense that Inuyasha has not smelled or heared anything.

I know it´s hard to keep the characters in line when you write a fanfiction but that´s what makes a fic really good. And to be honest, Sesshoumaru would never mate with a human even if I love the idea of him and Kagome. Don´t take this as a flame, I would love to see more of your work.

VERY GOOD. Is this re-written? I have read this fanfic before, but it was different.