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for To Be Cursed

by DarkRainFiend

person Ryukotsusei
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My what an evil place to leave off LOL Can't wait to see how Kagome handles this situation. It doesn't look too good for Rin or Jaken right about now. Good chapter, update soon please
person swasdiva
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good sweet lord, I am really loving this fic. Your angle on Kagome sympathizing with Sugimi through Shippo was an interesting take, and I must say a much more plausible motivation than if she just randomly started to love Sesshoumaru. It's clever turns like that, coupled with your strong writing, that keeps me on my toes. Your pace is steady, but leaves just enough mystery to keep me guessing, too. I'm quite enamoured with this story, and can't wait to read more. Is Kagome going to save Rin and impress Sesshoumaru? Will they save her together? Will he catch them at a bad time and assume Kagome hurt Rin? Oh the possibilites are endless! Great, thrilling chapter!
person badkitty
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, evil cliffy. Can't wait till the next chapter, hope Rin and Jaken is alright. I'm also wondering exactly how Kagome is gonna get the tomb/pearl out of Inuyashas eye. Update soon.
person Shadow Girl
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! You have me hooked
to this story, that's for sure! Update as soon as you can!
person MysticAngel77 (NSI)
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another exciting chapter, and you're pretty evil with that cliffy there, but it's ok, I have faith that you will deliver an awesome chapter soon for a followup! ^_^ Cant wait to see what Kagome does to help little Rin... plus how Sesshoumaru reacts!
person JBella
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Errr...I hate cliffhangers. Now I'm gonna obsess about this story until you update it again!

My favorite part of this chapter was how insightful Miroku was. So many times, he's portrayed as just a groping, smutty pervert. And don't get me wrong, I love that about him. But I also like it when his intelligence is shown. Not to mention, it was a great writer's tactic to develop plot and character. Good job!

Update soon!
person badkitty
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love it, I love it, I love it. All your stories are so good. What a great plot! Update soon!
person Helen
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an interesting story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder how the rest of the inu-tachi will react when Kagome and Sesshomaru get together.
person azurephoenix
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great please update
person JBella
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I hope you update soon. I also hope Inuyasha realizes what he's lost because Kikyou always seems to betray him, and Kagome is always there for him. I love Sess/Kag stories (my favorite pairing!), so I can't wait to see the next chapter!