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for A stalker across time

by SoulessFayt

person Mmoirai
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your idea very very much. Please though, please try to proof read it before you post, and use paragraphs, and " " quotation marks. I really think this could be something great if it is formatted prpoerly. You have a really great story line. I really want to know who her stalker is. Keep it up, keep trying, and I know you will do well.
person inukami
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting... But a bit confusing. There is no way in hell that Sesshoumaru could act like that. So I guess that the boy is not the Taiyoukai. Don't tell it's Hojo ?
person inu-kami
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a great start ! Please continue... As for the text in italics, try to use this form => [I]your text[/I] if it doesn't work try this [i]your text[/i]
As for your 'stalker', my guess goes to Sesshoumaru ^_^
person Silverkitsune26
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello (bows humbily) ^_^

I have read you're story and it's a good beginning. It's well written and you don't reviele who the "staker" is, so tat makes you curious on who it might be. I look forward to you're update.

Love ^_^
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. Post more soon?
person sexychick2000
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue, continue, please continue your tale.