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for Mindless

by xangel

person sma_orlando
schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please finish this story.
person GrayWolf
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I like it! plz update it soon
person Crazy Fangirl 0098 Sesshy
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved the 'evil' Rin part! I LOVED IT!

I adore this fic!
person Lemon crazy
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
person alittleblooper
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm....no offense, but this is so insanely OOC that i'm getting a little scared to continue reading. 'cause, well, sesshoumaru definitely does not act THAT gullible and innocent; he's characterized quite a bit like a girl here......being taken advantage of by Rin......am i the only one that senses yuri? lol
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wierd yet intriging
person Princess Sin
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so, does this means she's possessed.
person Akasakeme (logged off)
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a good plot, but it was a bit confusing, You just jumped from one idea to another.
person Princess Sin
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
who would have thought sweet little rin would
turn out to be such a monster. it is a very
interest story twist but i just can't see rin
being that evil. is this really rin or is this
one of naraku's incarnations. come on, you
can tell me
person Rocky
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't imagen Lord Sesshomaru-sama ever not fighting back... even if it was Rin... i mean... he would at least push her away or something... but that's my oppinion... it's also in my oppinion that i dislike most girls... anime women... not real women... i mean most r really kool to get to know... but i still can't see Sesshomaru-sama ~ever~ submiting to anyone... nice plot... u kind jumped around a little but not to where i couldn't understand it... just that it was a little... jumpy... but it was good keep it up!