rate_review Reviews

thats so sweet. youre words, they're amazing. i wish i had such obvious, fantastic talent to describe. i want to cry now. i really really really really hope she's not dead as you kinda nudge at in the beginning. i hate sad endings/beginnings/ poor sesshy. oh dear i need a tissue now. you're fantastic, please keep writing.

Brilliant, beautiful...I'm already in love with story. The descriptions, the analogies...breath-taking. The first chapter was so beautifully dark, so deliciously noir with its dreary setting, the passionate violence from Sesshomaru-I was hooked from the first sentence. As much as I hate to wait for updates (who doesn't? ^_^), I must say that if the rest of the story continues like this, it will be well worth it.

Wonderful beginning...I'm off to read your other story!

great chapter, beautifully written.good take in Sesshy! i think you kept him in character very well.

Wow..that was so emotional...it was great. Please udate soon.

Well that chapter made me cry. Damn this is a good story, I feel so sorry for Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Losing a parent is not easy. If there were any grammatical mistakes I did not notice I was too engrossed in the story, so if you have another chapter to post up go right ahead!

Great start on this story. It pulled me in. The way you portrayed Sesshomaru's emotions were well written out. Well, I do hope to read more.

Chanda

Wow. I'm speechless. This is an absolutely amazing beginning. Please, add more soon.

Please continue on with this story, I love the angst. Can't wait to read more!!!