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for Basic Instinct

by MysticAngel77

person Rawben
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, great chapter! you're going to continue right?? i hope so!!
person chanda
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like surprises... Look forward to more...

Happy New Years,
Chanda
person JBella
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah. I'm definitely anticipating the next chapter of THIS story. But I'm curious as to just who Kagome will be with. You've established Inuyasha is feeling rather, well, uncomfortable around her, but there is that whole Kikyou thing, too. I can't wait to see where you take this, so please update soon!
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this one! Your writing is excellent, and the way you draw Kagome and Inuyasha are exactly the way I imagine them in my own mind.
person jacque
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more, by all means! kagome can be such a little tease. i can just see her teasing lil inu until he can't stand it anymore and just jump her bones, ending in them having hot sex until kagome protest she can't move her lower body anymore ^_^

great job and really hope to see how they are going to handle their arousals real soon.
person Catt
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You so have to update! Excellent girly! ^_^
person Shadow Girl
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. What more is there to say? ^_^