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WHOA kagome all hot and bothered and a sexually frustrated inuyasha! lol nice plot,update soon k? need to read more! ^_^

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wow.
that's all I can say. Wow. That was one of the most graphic and sexy masturbation scenes I have ever read and usually that doesn't even turn me on. Excellent job on the lemon aspects. You may want to flesh out Inuyasha's character b/c he's a little flat right now. However, I DARE you to have Yuka and Kagome have sex before she does it with Inuyasha and then maybe have a kag/inu and then...just maybe...a threesome between the experienced Yuka adn Kagome and innocent Inuyasha. whoo...I'm off in daydream land right now. Please do this. I need to see that. At least the schoolgirl lesbian scene. Have mercy!
whatever you decide, i can't wait to read!

lol!!!! great chapter! and very funny! ;)

awesome, keep going!

I love it! Please update soon.

I enjoyed that and was wondering if there would be more chapters soon if you could email me for updates that would be awesome
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you had better update or im going to be severly disaponted

P.S GREAT!!!!! HEHEHEHEH

Plz write more! Excellent! I loved it...

Can't wait to see how Kagome and Inuyasha deal with this new element ^_~ I just love Inu & Kag smut...especially when it's all new to both of them......Should be in for some great reading--can't wait for your next update!!