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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
come on write! its very good and i just love the story line so far. Please Write!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another thing. Stop trying to rush it. You are rushing the story and that is definatley something you dont want to do. It makes it sound stupid. But I cant help but love the storyline so dont ruin it.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep on writing, though i suggest you write your chapters a little bit longer but other than that, your story is really interesting so far:D
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your reviews, Rachie isn't flamming you, i agree with her, check you spelling and grammar and write a little longer and people will you leave you great reviews. I love it when people flame me cause i do get personal with them and it helps me write better. It's a good start but I'll keep reading, I try to at least read five chapters but so far.....
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didnt flame you. A flame is someone saying that your fic is down-right terrible which it isnt. I am enjoying it and am keeping up with the updates. I say check your spelling because people take it more seriously is you use proper spelling. This IS a story. And the longer chapter thing you dont even need to worry about if you update very frequently. It is good to have constructive critism. Thats very different from a flame and should be welcomed. I only review fics when I really like them and I have something of importance to say. Reviews saying "OMG I love you story" just mean exactly what they say and they are trying to encourage you to keep updating. But you learn nothing from them. I have problems with my fic too. I am still a novice. I have trouble with updating and chapter lengths. But what I said to you was no flame. I am really enjoying your fic so if construcive critism that will help you in the long run discourages you. I will stop reviewing if you would like. I am sorry you feel like I am flaming you. Please update again soon!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is pretty good but check your spelling more and why does girls bunk with boys?
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE WRITE MORE I CAN"T TAKE IT I WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it >.< is funny >.< anywho keep the chapters coming plz!!!! =^-^=
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I really like your idea. But you really need to write at least a little bit longer chapters and use spell check. You are worse in those categories than me and thats definatley not something to strive for! ^_^; But yeah. If you just do those two things and don't do anything to corny than this will definatley be a fic I will adore!