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for No Business like Show Business

by FoxyBlue

person Akasakeme
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ *claps* you're doing so good! I'm happy someone who knows how to write well took up my challenge...but don't you think you should put this in the sess/kag section?
person Akasakeme
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I dif find one spelling error, though. It's spelled "negotiate". Other than that, graet job ^^
person FoxyBlue
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ! Hmm maybe you're right. I'll try and fix that. Glad you like it so far.