rate_review Reviews

Wow, That was great. I loved the idea. Wish there was more to come. HOPE, PLEASE MORE. You did very well.

Woah...Gosh I get a pairing I love and a nice, steamy, mentionably plotty, long, one shot!!! or is it...? hmmm. Do you have any more dastardly plans for Seshsouamru to carry out in this game? Or is the game over for us...(not for them of course;] ) I highly enjpoyed your style of writing, and loved the interaction you had betwen them, the stages and everything. BUt I do want to know who dumped KAgs and what they said to break her...and I really would love a sequel of their relationship becoming more...errr...relationship-ish. And Sesshoumaru geting all protective and gung-ho wouldn't be too bad either. LOts of love and great job!!!

WOW!!!!!!!!! OMG that was HOT!!!! DAMN!!!! Just thinking about it makes me wish that I was in her place. Talk about seduction. Sesshoumaru-sama can definitely teach a couple of people how to play the game, PROPERLY.

Needless to say, I loved this fanfic. Let me know if you write another enticing fanfic.

Good luck with future works.

Ryohko

uhhh i don't want this to be a one shot make more please!!!!

i liked your story alot. i think you should continue it instead of having it a oneshot.=)

I LOVE IT you know u could make this in to a story.

this is yummy! ^^ .:chomp:.

i really love this! its refreshing. :D

its not sudden, not like they meet and have sex in random places. it makes sense, makes them seem more in character. :D and it is so wonderfully written! everything flows together, and even her heartbreak fits in so well with his feelings and actions. :D and you dont make her seem forward, or too submissive, or anything! :o this is soo wonderful! i hope you write more! :D

This is an amazing story, very cute and sexy. If there will be more chapters, please update soon.

That was a great one-shot!!! I loved it. It was well written and sexy!
I hope to see more works from you soon!!! Keep up the wonderful work!

I loved this, It was HOT HOt HOT! So his game turned into something more eh? *grins* I hope to see more from you soon, even if this one was only a one-shot.

~Kage