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for Elevator Games

by Ablyss

person Kinnara
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Praise this fic! *bows in front of author* Wow, this is like one of the best I've read.
person naraku_lover
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! I loved it so much. Though i still don't get what happened to KAgome and why she became so broken. BUt it was really good.
person amber
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i really liked ur story i wish u would continue with it
person Flightoffancy
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story. I had to go cool off before I could write a sensible sounding review. You definitely have the GAME pegged. I wish everyone knew that sex is 8/10's foreplay and 2/10's cuddling afterward. The ACT anyone can do. Sesshomaru (and you) turned it into an art form, breathtaking. You took this simple concept, dressed it up and took us for a sensual, velvet covered, soul-touching experience. You make us wish we could find someone who took that kind of time. If you have done anything else I would like to know. My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net. If you do anything else please let me know.
person meh
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was so awesome!!! There has to be a sequel, pretty please
person Bratasia
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your 1 shot was great, the best 1 Ive read in a log time!!!! U should make a story out of it, it was amazing ^_^.

Tae tay
person Epiphany
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot and Sexy... my two favorites.

It's hard to find a good author for any fanfiction, and in all seriousness (and I say this not to boost your ego too much, or to wheedle anything out of you... not that I could over a computer...), you're now at the top of my list for just that one-shot, in which I think you need to turn into a full-blown story... no pun intended. Well, not need to, it's excellent as is, though I do suggest it. I love the long, drawn out stories and I think that this would be a good long and drawn out fanfiction. And of course, with the bonus of the involvment of sex, everyone is happy! (Except for those damn soccer moms, but we love them anyway).

So, in hopes that you take my suggestion (or at least put up more smutty stories to satiate my sick and twisted perversness), I bid you good luck with all your endeavors.

Epiphany
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That rocked so fucking hard!!!!! I loved oh I loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! You area so good at writing i envy you!
person mrs sesshy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! love the story line... how I wished my office has elevators...
person Beckie
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story and would like to read some of your other stories. Can you e-mail me a link?