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for Elevator Games

by Ablyss

person Riana.J
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
''OH MY GOD''!!! That story was GREAT I mean ''really, really GREAT'' I fell in love with it, Elevator Games is now my favroite story about my two lovers Sessy&Kags. I just LUV it!!!!
person Kokoro
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...WOW AWSOME! I loved this story, I usaly don't like Sesshomarou and Kagome parings, I prefer Inuyasha and kagome but you wrote it well, ^_^ I loved how you used lots of deatial and little diloge most people can't do that or don't like it but I feel it makes the story more instering great job keep up the good work!

*Kokoro*
person tanesha
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW O__O THAT'S WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SESSHOMARU GOES OUT TO DINNER WITH KAGOME AND WHO WAS KAGOME'S BOYFRIEND BECAUSE ONLY THAT OR THE DEATH OF SOMEONE CAN MAKE HER ACT THAT WAY?

THIS SHOULDN'T BE A ONE-SHOT BECAUSE SESSHOMARU INVITED KAGOME TO DINNER WITH HIM AND I'M SURE THAT THERE ARE PEOPLE THAT WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS BETWEEN THEM AND IF THEY HAVE A RELATIONSHIP OR NOT?

WHO WAS KAGOME'S BOYFRIEND?

ONEGAI UPDATE SOON

JA NE
person #1WithABullet
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are You Continuing This Story?
person Fluffylover
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!
person Summer rayne
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i kno you sed this is a 1 shot but you cant leave it here. I am in suspense. How did their date go? Why was she crying? For who was she crying ? Somuch left unanswered. you have to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Caitriona
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was one completely HOT piece of lemon. You build the tension so slowly that by the time the two of them do get together the reader is almost as desperate for the joining as the two participants. Excellent job!

Caitriona
person Snow
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story was GREAT!!! I just hope that instead of making it a one-shot, you can expand it instead.
person michelle
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god day-amn girlfriend!! is this definitely a one-shot? b'coz girl, this fic is like so not ova!!! damn it but i wanna read how yummy sesshomaru is gonna seduce and be seduced as he woos kagome!!!! this fic is sooooooooo going on my favs chica!^_~*
person Wolfye P.
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the BEST lemons I have ever read. So much detail and insight into the mysterious mind of Sesshoumaru. Excellent work!