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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pareathe is a much better writer. And who is Irin? Did you mean Rin? And why would Sesshomaru talk to Naraku at all? They are enemies. According to Pareathe's notes, the story takes place after Sesshomaru and Inuyasha have semi-settled their differences and are not longer trying to kill each other. You don't seem to have a good grasp of the Inuyasha story.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it but it need a lot more so herry up with the 2ed chapter
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This falls short of the original story. I am sorry. This is just not good at all.
This reads like a horny 12 year old wrote it. Please.. .go back and read the first chapters and get a better grip of what it was about. This chapter does not do you or the story justice.
This reads like a horny 12 year old wrote it. Please.. .go back and read the first chapters and get a better grip of what it was about. This chapter does not do you or the story justice.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good please up date
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is there going to be any more ??
i enjoyed reading this
i enjoyed reading this
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oommm, nice start, can't wait to read more. Nicely written, good j0b!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO no no no no no not this no y did u end it there y y y????????
o well update soon no NOW hurry aaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggghhhhhh!!!!!!
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o well update soon no NOW hurry aaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggghhhhhh!!!!!!
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