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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
zervus,
i don't see why anyone would flame you like you make it look. at least someone is trying to end this. so far i in personal have no problem with the way you handle the characters. so they are a bit OOC, so what? it's not like this situation was part of the main story, so noone can realy say.
anyway keep up your work; I like it.
T
i don't see why anyone would flame you like you make it look. at least someone is trying to end this. so far i in personal have no problem with the way you handle the characters. so they are a bit OOC, so what? it's not like this situation was part of the main story, so noone can realy say.
anyway keep up your work; I like it.
T
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the continuation of the story. I can't wait until u update. Please tell me u are going to continue? Don't listen to the bad reviews this story is a good one. Trust me I have read many and have read worse. Your doing a great job.
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good Kichi. I really like it so far. The only thing I caught was:
"He began to stoke her faster and she gasped, reaching behind her to massage furry ears that just weren’t there. She froze and the scent of her fear hit him. He tensed and spun her around in his grasp."
He was still human, so he should not have smelt anything. Maybe you meant to use 'sense' or something like that. But other than that this was excellent. Can't wait to read more :)
"He began to stoke her faster and she gasped, reaching behind her to massage furry ears that just weren’t there. She froze and the scent of her fear hit him. He tensed and spun her around in his grasp."
He was still human, so he should not have smelt anything. Maybe you meant to use 'sense' or something like that. But other than that this was excellent. Can't wait to read more :)
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it plz continue
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the hell was that? An author's notes? A rant? Don't post if there's nothing to post. You just piss people off.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I went and read the first part of this story using the link you listed. It was wonderful and well written and captured the characters beautifully.
And then I came back here...and saw your poor efforts... *sighs* I won't be reading anymore.
I'm very upset with what you have done to her story.
And then I came back here...and saw your poor efforts... *sighs* I won't be reading anymore.
I'm very upset with what you have done to her story.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Youre such a maenieee! Such a cliffhanger! Update soon!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I read this story when it was posted up on Anime Spiral. Of course it stopped updateing around day 4. One thing that I noticed was that you didn't include the earlier chapters. I remember day 3 was my favourite. I suggest that you post the story from the beginning so any new readers would be able to understand the story from the beginning. However I'm glad you posted this, I really want to see how it has ended. Best of Luck! Zincpaw
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I like this story!
I can't wait to see how Inu reacts to this news!
Great job with this chapter!
I can't wait to see how Inu reacts to this news!
Great job with this chapter!