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for Devil's Beauty

by Rocky

person inufangirl007
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very sexy! please update soon!
person Akela
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
learn to spell, and i might consider reading this.
person inufangirl007
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can imagne how inu looks there! *drool* great chapter! please update soon!
person jem89
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love Sess/Inu pairings! Please update soon :)
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start! please update soon! P.S. inu/sess is my fav yaoi paring in the world!
person _
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh How cool!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

There is gonna be another chapter... right? 0_0
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since it's your first fic I'll play nice.

You need to brush up your writing a bit (ever considered maybe getting a beta or editor?) but otherwise you have an interesting plot.

I can't imagine Inuyasha ever promising (even if only to himself) to become Sesshomaru's concubine though.