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for Devil's Beauty

by Rocky

schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to the rest , I hope you update soon.
person Minami
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! i love this story, and the other one you have here to! HA, i can just imagine the thoughts running through Inyasha's head about mating for 2 whole day's with a youkai Lord! whooo *fans self* gotta say im lookin forward to it!! (lol)
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the SEX?! ...sorry...I'm getting excited...*giggles crazily* Keep it up!!!
person nette
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story. i cant wait to see how the two's relationship will go especially with a new addition, a.k.a. shippo. i hope sessh doesnt kick him out. ok update soon and your doing a good jod so far. :)
person Polka dot
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure where I read the beginnning of this but I'm glad it's past the unpleasant part.
person jem89
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this and your other story! Please update soon :)
person nette
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv it lik it must finish. please new chapter. :) hurry need more sessh/inu time
person sess-koi
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Inuyasha. :*( And that bastard Naraku. This story has a great beginning. It might be the fact that I read it at 3 in the morning, but the dialogue seemed rush. I’m not a writer so I can’t offer and real criticism there. I just hope you update soon. I want to see how Inuyasha deals with Kagome and the gang’s ‘betrayal’. (I quote it because I got the impression that Naraku treated the gang into leaving) And also I would like to see more from that flashback. It seems that, that might have been one of the instances where the brothers realized their feels for each other. Yeah, I think you should explain that a little more. Sess and Inu don’t seem the type to just start wanting to claim each for no reason. So I guess my only true criticism of your story is more back-story about the development of their feelings for one another. Other than that I look forward to reading more. Update soon. Happy Writing!
person inu's slave
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oye. update?
person kenya
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great. i am intrigued, please continue.