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for Moving Pictures

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person Snowfall
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm gonna cry. *sob* She's leaving him. Gone. Awesome battle scene though. Just loved it. Yes! A toasted Yukio. Na, na, na, na, na, an. I admit that I'm acting childish, but you have me really pumped. You gave Sess his arm back. Yay! Weeee! I think I'm having a manic attack. It's all your fault. You're such a great author.

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person Snowfall
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I almost forgot. Sess is such a fucking prick sometimes. He wouldn't be worth the trouble if it weren't for his youkai. And you managed to make me feel sorry for him. How did you do that? Also, I found the refrigerator comment really funny.

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person Jacqui
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LUV!! THIS STORY! really well written and made me lol a few times too. If youre not writing it any more thats ok but i enjoyed every chapter and congradulate you on a job well done. i especially liked your idea for the time travelling painting, thats a new one to me. 10/10
person Snowfall
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know when you threw all of these chapters on, but I'm excited as hell. Charlotte's struggle to get back through the painting was awesome. Wow, Sess can be rough! I would expect it of him though. Then, Charlie shows up! OMG! That was awesome. And Sess is being so calm cool and collected. This is an awesome fic. Okay, so I over use the word. Tough. It's what this fic is. It's like watching a movie. WooHoo! Off to read more chappies!

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person Snowfall
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Back through the painting. I hope that Charlie is alright. You are so damn creative. The whole water and towel fight. Her and Sess being interrupted by Inuyasha and the gang. I am so glad that you gave Sesshoumaru a libido. Yummy. Damn the interruptions though. Hah! Aio got hers, little bitch. Oh yeah. Someone that we love to hate. On to more chappies!!! One more thing. Hehe, Miroku had better be good!

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person Snowfall
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful love scene. Yup, I did not say 'sex' for a reason. Mmm. Wonder if she caused Sess's arm to grow any. Can't wait til I read the next chappie! *sniffle* I hope they can be together somewhere. I love her jibes at Inu and then Sess's interruption. That was priceless. It was all good. Damn, this is a good fic. Off to read more if there is any!

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person Snowfall
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Catnip! Oh, yeah! Those were great chapters. Don't know how I missed them. Her change was totally awesome. I love the strained 'relationship' between her and Sesshoumaru. You are doing a great job with this fic. She's such a spitfire. I find those type of female characters very amusing. Oooh, I wish someone would shut Jakken the hell up. He is so annoying. She got so close, so close to discovering Inuyasha. Aaach! The suspense!

I anxiously await more of this wonderful fic.

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person roke
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My guess is the plant is catnip! Woot. score one for me. My cat is getting high off some right now. Well I have to say this is much better then alot of "stories" ive read in a while. So update soon! I look forward to reading more ~_^
person Snowfall
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting. I don't know if Charlotte is from another anime, but I like her character. And of course, I'm infatuated with Sesshoumaru! Hehe. Keep up the good work.

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