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My my my. I have no idea if you still check your reviews for this story but I want you to know I LOVED IT. You captured the characters so well and your OC was quite lovely. She was in no way a mary sue and the story was perfect. I am just sad that it is now over (and that I just now discovered it) but the ending was soooooo sweet. Bravo!

I love this story, very well written and great ending. I also can't wait til the next chapters of you other fics, both HP and InuYasha! When you do add to them, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

AWESOME!!!

That story rocked! Good job and I can't wait to see more of your work, if you post any that is.

Aw, what an absolutely sweet and moving story. I was a little misty eyed there myself lol! I'm glad they all have the family and love they deserve, and Sesshomaru's tenderness toward his daughter imparticularlly hit a soft spot within me. Is there anything cuter than a big strong dude with a baby girl?? This is a really beautifully written piece of work. I hope everyone desides to give it the chance I did. P.S. I would love an epilogue ~wink wink nudge nudge~! Great job, you should be exceptionally proud of yourself:)

Ah, very exciting indeed. I can't wait for Sesshomaru to meet up with everyone. Fun times and misunderstandings ahead I think:P

Okay, So I am new to this Inu Yasha fanfiction thing. I typically write in outher areas;but I recently decided to come check this out. So I opened the link and found your story. I have read the entire nineteen chapters in one day, my eyes ever glued to the screen. I have to read more soon, you are an amazing writer with a brilliant plot thus far. I cannot wait to read more, please, oh please update soon!!


MaryElla

Just finished with chapter 16 and wow, that was wonderful. Your writing is vivid and flows effortlessly with your creativity. I saw that you said you were already finished with it and just needed to post the remaining chapters; well I hope there are thirty more chapters to accompany this because it really is inspiring. One of my favorites. Update soon please:)

I've been avoiding this story and I don't really know why, but I decided 'what the hey?' and read it anyway. I'm on Chapter 13 and all I can say is that I love it. Charlotte is one of the funniest characters I've ever read and Sesshomaru is spot on.

By the way, this is priceless:
~Miroku interrupted her train of thought at the unfamiliar term, “Boffing?”

“You know, boning, banging, showing his ‘o’ face, making sweet love down by the fire…”

“Ah! He enjoys the company a fine woman!” Miroku’s eyes sparkled in delight.~

I was going to wait until the last posted chapter I read to comment, but this chapter is beyond wonderful. Two very huge thumbs up for you my dear. Great great job. P.S. I'm not so much into cuddling (I know, I'm a wierd girl), but damn! lol, very sweet:)

WooHoo! Sessy shows his power to those that would oppose him. A passionate kiss for Charlotte. And, ooooh, something evil lurks behind the door! Off to see just what that something is!

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