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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have an interesting story going on don't stop and don't listen to the crappy comments.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I'm sorry *some* people of this website enjoy bashing the GOOD material of others while they have no work to show for themselves.
Guess what people who review on the "OOC of some characters", did you write Kagome's character? Or Kuroune? No. So you do not truly know them, and any author can take whatever prospective of a character they want on this site, as long as they include a disclaimer.
If you want to "flame" or "bash" another person's work, take a step up and show that your work is better.
Merry Christmas Ya' bastards.
Guess what people who review on the "OOC of some characters", did you write Kagome's character? Or Kuroune? No. So you do not truly know them, and any author can take whatever prospective of a character they want on this site, as long as they include a disclaimer.
If you want to "flame" or "bash" another person's work, take a step up and show that your work is better.
Merry Christmas Ya' bastards.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I like this story, don't let them get ya down. I dislike flames and the like and I agree that if someone doesn't like it in the first few seconds they should leave it alone. And not harass an author over it, however look at it this way.. it might cheer you up.... how many good reviews do you have as opposed to negative comments?
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please forgive the idiot who wrote that if they write stories you should just how well they do, i personally liked your story and would like for you to go on. if people don't like something then don't like something then they should try not to do it.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but the entire flow of the story is a bit on the corny side. Too much 'wuv and fluff.' You completely bastardize Kuroune into a lump of sap.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this story don't let one baka stop this great story. I love it!! I really love all your stories. Everyone hates flamers, I'm sorry they dumped on your work, trust me I know how that feels. But please say your going to update.
Just a thought but, how can anyone say Kuronue would act a certin way or not act another way. I mean in Yu yu they really don't go into any real detail about him. All we really know is he is a theif and Yoko's best firend. SO were does that reviewer get off say you've messed up Kuronue's character? So I'm sorry someone upset you, I think this story is great and hope to read more. So please update soon!!
Just a thought but, how can anyone say Kuronue would act a certin way or not act another way. I mean in Yu yu they really don't go into any real detail about him. All we really know is he is a theif and Yoko's best firend. SO were does that reviewer get off say you've messed up Kuronue's character? So I'm sorry someone upset you, I think this story is great and hope to read more. So please update soon!!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, whoever said that to you was a complete idiot! I absoutly loved your story! Please write more just to make whoever said that mad!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tell him he can go fuck himself I loved it.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please do not allow one person who, i might add be a dick wad, to ruin writing for you. i have seen it happen to many a talanted authors. I however loved your story and wish for it to continue. if you would like
you could always e-mail it to me so that i may read it if this one jerk off has ruined it. i will give me e-mail to you if you so wish to contact me. please do not stop writing. i like your story as is and would really like to
see it continue. thank you
~ infinite silence
you could always e-mail it to me so that i may read it if this one jerk off has ruined it. i will give me e-mail to you if you so wish to contact me. please do not stop writing. i like your story as is and would really like to
see it continue. thank you
~ infinite silence
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOOOVE YOU!!!!! Hurry update!!! ...and MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!! I absolutely love this group of pairings...something about Kuronue just tickles me happy.