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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update Soon!! I can't wait to read more of your story. I want to hear about how Kag and Yoko meet and what happens when the two men see each other. So please updater soon!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I like what you've written so far. please update soon. i would love to see what kurama's reaction to all of this would be............
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
common you...thats.....I... aaaahhhhhhhhhhh its to crule come on you have to write more so mean if you dont soon your robbing us of great LEMONS !!!!!!!! ^.^ :P
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've probably seen my name in mostly all your stories reveiws. I am a fan of all your works so that must tell you that you are doing a pretty damn good job!!! So update ok???
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy! Please please continue. . ..
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am very impressed. I think your writing is wonderful and look forward to future chapters. I can't wait for the Kagome/Kuronue/Yoko chapter.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I think I t's great. Yes simple as that great.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally liked the story and can't wait for the next chapter. The suspense is killing me.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck 'em. Ignore that other person's review. More often then not some reviewers seem to like to talk out of their ass. That one shot was great! I personally enjoyed it- and it was an awesome christmas present. People who leave negative reviews and no constructive criticism are assholes, and probably have no talent to string together a well worded sentence. Ignore them! Keep writing! For the love of god, dont end it there! And dont take that fool's words to heart- quite frankly they are wrong, I liked the flow of the story. The lemon and lime were hot, and you got a good feel of the character's too. Keep in mind that you didnt ask that idiot to read your story, and so if they dont like it they can go fuck themselves. ^.^
Merry Christmas!
Merry Christmas!
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i fully enjoyed the first chap and can't wait for the second. ignore the bastards that have no talent and are too afriad of writing their own story and they have to put down other peoples work. thank you and keep up the fine writing.