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for The Perfect Christmas

by SayuriNakamura

person Elizabeth
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon i want to read what will happen next.
PLease update!!!
person goddessofdarknessdragons
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a beautiful story. I like this one very much and thank you for wrighing it.
person sara
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was such a good fanfic. thankyou so much for writting such an awsome fic. i can't wait for the lemon or when hiei tells kagome he loves her. please update soon.

from sara
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person JBella
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the best one-shot I've read in a while. It was beautiful, even without the lemon. I had an idea for that, by the way. What better way to celebrate New Years!?!

person A person
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Simply put wow! I nearly cried at the end; it was so beautiful! You're right though...I can't imagine a lemon in this story! It's perfect already! I loved the locket idea...and a pouting Kurama...GENIUS! I believe you just gave the fangirl generation something MORE to drool about! Aaaw, a pouting Kurama..SQUEE, I say!! I felt that Sesshoumaru didn't have enough lines (did he even have lines?) and I know this is a one-shot...but I think it would have been cool if you would have explained Sesshoumaru and Kagome's sibling relationship. And what happened to Kagome's family? Kagome has more than one brother and didn't see him or even hear of a mention...Hey! It's a loose end...maybe you should write some more? *wink wink nudge nudge!* I can't believe this is just a one-shot!!! I wish I could make my own Inuyasha one-shot...but I don't have a muse. I respect the authors who can come up with all these lovely one-shots this time of year!
I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Merry Christmas!
Sincerly,
A person