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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it but in the last chapter the (not needed) or whatever was kindof distracting.... I still like it though
P.S.
thanks for the review
P.S.
thanks for the review
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Frig! grammer...not so good, plot is exquisite, cliff-hangers are acne-prodromal. Damn, hoping to see wat happens next. Update really really soon, plz. Maybe Naraku is going insane. Maybe Sesshy-sama is losin his sense of pride, youkai-dominance and is becomin pathetically....pathetic. Which in reality is quite impossible since Sesshy has a naturally born talent there. Three cheers for Sesshy-sama. oh, and it. is. not. a. tail. Fluffy ain't no tail, me personally, looks more like a pelt than a tail. Pfft! ridiculous. UPDATE!
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-.- ...you know you were supposed to erase my comments after I beta your work.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicely done. and yes, I would like to see that, although I am a little confused, I don't understand what part was embarassing.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ^^. Your writing skills have really started to improve lately. You still have some spelling, grammar, and punctuation problems, but it's really gotten better lately.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, Naraku has a conscience.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sess wakes up
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
guessed now u oh me two chappies get writing
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Sesshomaru woke up!!! Am I right? Tell me if I am.
Oh! By the way, great story... so far. Cn't wait to read what happens next!!! ^_~
Oh! By the way, great story... so far. Cn't wait to read what happens next!!! ^_~
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha interrupted?
Kagura came in and saw it all?
They died?
*Tries to find a good guess*
Kagura came in and saw it all?
They died?
*Tries to find a good guess*