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for I will protect you

by jokhazen

person Lady Lizgon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work! It makes me being eagerly (that spelling right?) for a new chapter to come. ^___^ Keep going!
person crystaladept
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter thus far. You keep me eagerly waiting for the next one.

There's something you might want to fix, though... One Chapter 13, you wrote chapter 12 instead of 13. You currently have two ch 12 where you go to skip to another chapter.
person Zaion
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your college starts on monday? Same goes for my college. *grin* And no, I'm not going to kill you for this. Good chapter. Keep going.
person Zaion
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grin* I still says Both. ^__^ *read a part* Egg? O__o Interesting! I hope a child is Naraku's. *got stoned by an angry fan of Inu/Miro* Ow! *rubs his head* Well, you're eating a EEL?! O___o Not what I think it is... or it is? >___o Shrimps and crabs are all sea foods I love. You gotta love sea food sauce for all sea foods! ^^

Sorry, off topic. ^^U Well, I'm still say both. "You Have Begun" O____o Ooooooooo! Do I know that means? *grin sly* I still hopes that child is always Naraku's. *got stoned again by an angry fan of Inu/Miro* Ow!

Well, Ciao! Ow....
person hiya
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea hes save with inyusha for now right i hope so :) let the story continue please!
person Lady Lizgon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_______________________________________^ *dance happily* Miroku is safe now. *paused* *reads out loud* "You have begun" said Sessy. O____O Scary. I can't wait to read next chapter to find out what happen! Which child are hanyou's (Inu or Nar) isn't matter to me now. (glared at Zaion)

Anyway, keep it up! I would vote the both ending. Ciao! *walks off*
person Lady Lizgon
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^____^ YAY! Inu recused Miro! *dance happily* *paused* I think Kagome and Sango wanted to long, awkwardly explains from InuYasha. XD I should to see how he handle the situation with the girls and their quesitons. haha!

Poor Miroku but hey, at least he's with Inu now.

(paused when she remember something) I wonder why Naraku's wearing a red ones, unless he's trying to be InuYasha so Miroku would thinks he's inuyasha. Oo

Anyway... Great chapter! ^__^ Updated soon!

Ciao!
person Hello
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would either have both sad ending first then happy ending next :)

and thats was so sad but happy that inuyasha save him for now
person Secret Slash Reader
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOO LOL!! I love this story, hope you continue it, or I'll cry!!
person Zaion
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fell over* I was so close.... T-T I actually thought Naraku is going to claimed him as his mate so I could died happily. *got up* Oh well, at least InuYasha got here to save Miroku. *shrug* Keep it up! ^____^ It don't matter it is a happy ending or a sad ending in next chapter or other chapters. I'd rather choose a both. *shrug sheepishly*

Great work!