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for I will protect you

by jokhazen

person jou
schedule April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sad but i loved it
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I rreeally hurt from that story
person Sylvir
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know this was written and finnished a long time ago but I just had to comment. It is a completely strange thing to type and I feel it might sent me to hell but I really respect you having Miroku killing the baby. Most people would have done fanservice and had it be born a normal baby and let it live leaving Miroku, Inuyasha, and baby to live happily ever after. My hat is off to you. Now I'm off to read something newer by you.
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU KILLED THE BABY! it sounded so sweet, not evil a tall... i love miroku, though. i wonder what would have happened if the baby had lived, as well as naraku...hmm... well, i LOVE your stories, cuz they're beautiful, and i love uke!miroku fics! keep writing!!!

ASOTA
person Nitho
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOWZERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^. i guess that pretty much covers it. yeah. lets see what was my favorite scene. It would have to be when Inuyasha steals a kiss from Miroku and finds out that he liked it. Yup Yup that has to be it. ~_~. Keep on Cranking them out like this one okie dokie? Thnx for the wonderfull story.
person rin
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) very nice
person Cherry
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GYAHHHHH!!!! U ROCK LIKE HELL!!!!! Seriously, is AFF short of viewers or the readers of this fic is just struck with Down Syndrome and can't click the review button??? Truth be told, if you are in FF.net, you'll have a guarranteed 300+ reviews under your belt on this one, if it isn't for the stupid, STUPID NO LEMONS RULE!!! It was very, VERY nice!!! Everything was in character, no OOC, you ROCK with the reaction of the girls, Sesshoumaru's personality (though I'd like him to tug-and-war with Inuyasha over Miroku, but man!! You put it SO in character, and the fact that 'he just hate Naraku' thing is so cool!)

The storyline, the LOVELY, LOVELY storyline!!! The plot is VERY interesting!! COOOOLLLL!!! Everything is in place! And the way you put Sesshoumaru just had a teeny weeny crush on Miroku is great!! Really, just what I wanted! Three guys - Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru, and Naraku all at Miroku's top! (lolz...*blush*) I had ALWAYS wanted to see how authors write or describe Miroku as "beautiful", and you did it, so far I see, THE BEST BABY, BETTER THAN ANY FIC IN FF.NET!!!! KYAH!!!!! *Jumps up and down all over the place!!!*

I just SO love your fic! Although it's finished (well, that's also a good thing, not having to wait for updates), I just can't help but REVIEW!!! It's VEWY, VEWY nice!!!!! If not for some spelling mistakes, I'll give you a 10 ova' 10, babe!!!!

KYAH!!!! *Oohh, lookie, there's holes at the ceiling, better stop jumping....*
*Last eternal scream and freaks out and dies.... Argh, browsing your other fics later......*
KYAHHHHH!!!!!!

VEWY sincerely,
Cherry (no account here now)
Horong in FF.net
person Heavenly
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey u said u like reviews so heres one....i liked it..it was the first fan fiction that Ive ever read but it still seemed kindve short...but I really did like it...let me know when u make another one!!...I also like writing ..I write poetry myself...well Cya!!
person Rinrei
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool, maybe you should post this at fanfiction, then I could add it to my C2s, he! This is rinrei Hikari from ff.net!
person P.C.
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh, gawd*______* I usually don't say anything this dirty, but I'm soaking my panties right now^^;;; Well, it's that good!