rate_review Reviews

Despite your summary, which almost turned me away from this fic, I must say this story is extremely good. I look very much forward to reading the next chapter. You indicated at the bottom of one of your recent chapters that you are willing to have readers let you know of any errors in your grammar and spelling. Actually, there are very few, but a couple that might be of interest to you are cited below.

Kaedae actually is spelled Kaede


She traced her finger on the floor and contemplated what would happen, but was snapped from her thoughts when the door opened and a few candle bras (candelabra) lit to reveal Naraku staring down at her manically.

This is starting to get very interesting. Please update again soon.

Wow... wow... wow...
That was good!!! Can you please keep writing this?
I hope you will
*puppy dog eyes*

When I say disturbingly good. I mean that. Where did you get this plot? Wow. Update soon. Cause I'll be back to read more.

good stuff, good stuff.....hope to see an update soon!

A very nice story, good character and plot build up. I looking forward to reading more.

Thank you for the corrections, anonymous!

This was really good. More soon please.