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for When A Scorpion and Leo Meet

by DaOnleeSam

schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it but i got a question who is the leo amd who is the scorpion and is there more of inuyasha,kagome,ayame,kouga,sango and miroku.
dont stop writing this story
let me know when your done wit the next chapter
not to be mean or anything but check your spelling and how you mix the words up
plus make sure the sentences sould right even after spell check
person kagome2004
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kagome2004
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.....please please keep updating..... ur doing a great job
person humming
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your storys hot and you know it so hurry and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person Tsadoriko
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome story update soon longer chaps.plz
person kagome2004
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is torture!!!!!!!!!!!!! please write more more more.............please write longer chapters........please write more.......it is getting really good
person Akasakeme
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aah, you may wanna consider a beta.
person kagome2004
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i love it!!!!!!......this is going to be a very interesting story......please update
person LaLaMoon
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You.......... Update.......... Soon.......... Please............ Cause thats a really good fic. So, how is rin gonna fix Ayame up with koga?
person kagome2004
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome............i am liking this.......it is an awesome start please continue