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for Imprisonment

by jarlaxlechan

schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
End.. as THE END?... NOOOOOOOO!.... :(

It was yummy.. but I feel sad for Sess-sama.. He's going to be Naraku's sextoy for all eternity? (Even if.. gods.. the way you describe Sess... *drools* I would love to have him like that toooooo! *blush)

And Naraku too.. he's falling in love.. O.o that's new...But I adore the way you put him in the story, the way that Naraku is slowly letting he's lust turn into more... Never forgetting that he's a cruel and just EVIL person, but he still has feelings too..

I really love your style of writting.. You even made me read a Naraku/Sess..! When all I can see in Inuyasha and drool is with the incest! (I just really really love Sess/Inu!!) sad that you have so little stories... Hope to read more from you!
person vampunk
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. I'm very intrigued as to where you are going to take this. Sesshoumaru's actions were wonderfully in character, which is very refreshing. And Naraku is wondefully done as well. I look forward to reading more.
person Sessygirl
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great fic, I don't see why you had to revise it, the original was just fine the way it was. I don't think you could write a bad fic even if you wanted to. I still say we should write one together.lol. Oh and you still haven't read my new one. You better go do that!
person anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I should be worried that I am this addicted to your story...=x I can't wait for the next chapter. And no, what you posted wasn't boring in the least!
person Silverkit
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O-O; *has passed out many times from all the blushing*.....................HOLY HELL!!!! WRITE MORE!! WRITE MORE!! LEMME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE!!!!*huggles you many times*
person bluedragonstarheart
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more, Please! I'm really sorry for keeping this short but it's nearly 1 am here and I'm F***ing tired and I'm going to bed to dream of sess and Naraku, storeies before bed always do that to me... goodnight and good luck



-bluedragonstarheart-
person anon
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremore! I am shocked at how good this was. This will be going on my favorite list for sure. Please put more up soon!
person sesshomarunaraku
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as possible.the story is great!!!!!!!!1
person Lill
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!

You have included all the necessary things to make it one of the best fics I have ever seen:
Details, good English, not too short, sex/lemon, very little spelling, and the most important things of all:
The beautiful Sesshoumaru and the gorgeous Naraku! Now that's a GOOD fic!!!!!
It's wonderful!! *Thumbs up!*

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^