Reviews for Quadrangle - Inuyasha

person sendosha

schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I regret that I have not reviewed your fic sooner because it´s really worth. It´s good to read a Sessh/Kag pairing with a good plot and you kept them in character. Yet I´m shoked too see how dense Inuyasha can be, even now after Kikyou said those things to him. Where was his honour when he was with Kikyou behind Kagome´s back? It seems that he has forget his promise to Kagome to protect her too and why can´t he smell the deceit on Kikyou now that she is an ordinary woman? And why are Miroku and Sango nice to Kikyou? Inuyasha just insulted her like he did Kagome on a daily basis yet they were angry with him compairing her with Kagome. I thought they would be more loyal to Kagome but it seems like they have no problem at all with Kikyou, she who was never trustworthy. Please update ASAP.

person swasdiva

schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Now I ain't sayin' she a gold digger...

Kikyo, I swear. You need to listen to a little song by a Mr. Kanye West. Or maybe Inuyasha should. He could learn the word 'pre-nup' and use it wisely. Seriously woman, you were born a few centuries too early with that 'Sugar Daddy' attitude...or wait...maybe you weren't...*swasdiva's head starts to hurt with the reincarnation implications *_* ~swirly~*

So yeah, I rather enjoy your take on Kikyo in this amazing story. You twist her desire to make Inuyasha human with a selfish cunning that gives me the willies!! But aside from her, and her drama, and Inuyasha, and his poor decision-making skills due to lack of forethought and situational analysis, I'd like to focus on Sesshoumaru.

Apparently audacious stupidity runs in that family.

Sweet lord, man...or...youkai!! PLEASE, for once, ask the girl you love what her intentions are instead of assuming that she's aware she's YOURS!!! HOLY COW!!! This situation is nerve-racking, which just goes to show how well-written this engaging fic is because it fits like a missing puzzle piece with Takahashi-san's style of holding...out...each...declaration...of...love...until...........the........ver.........y............

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I'm in such aggravated suspense that I was literally screaming at my computer screen for Sesshy to get his fine ass in gear and go after the woman!!!! ACK!! Really!! Men are all the same, I swear. I tell you, any fic that can invoke this kind of emotion, weave this kind of torturous cliffhanger, and keep me absolutely addicted is a fabulous fic IMHO. I adore this romantic tale, as stressful as it may be with sexy, cocky lugheads, and can't wait to read more!

person Seda