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by RhiannonoftheMoon

person zenia
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definatley want to see more of this story. I really liked it. It seems so unfinished. XDDD I will keep an eye on you for more.
person Wolfye Productions
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a delightful piece of fiction. You have a sound writing style and a wonderful descriptive ability. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. And as such, I would like to put in my vote for a sequel. I cant wait if you do!
person DemonQueen17
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sequel,sequel,sequel. This is really good. I can't stop reading this. ^_^
person kelly
schedule May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. totally you got another complete story out of this
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*POUTS* THATS NOT AN ENDING!!!! DOES SHE HAVE A MX BREED OR FULL BLOOD PUP *CIRES* It was still an amazing fic! Just like your other. :)
person Ladyskyfire
schedule May 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! What do you mean 'if' you write a sequal?! *dies* Please write a sequal!! I really wanna know what happens! You're such a good writer, you've really roped me into the story! Thank you for posting this, it was excellent! I really hope there is more to the story! Great job and thanks again!
person Kawaii-Kirara
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I would like to say that I think that the baby should be twins and not just one!;-) Ya know?...one girl one boy? Just an Idea okay so don't yell at me at all!...NEways...I really like that you're going to make a sequal to this story:-) This story has a VARY BRIGHT FUTURE! And I think that for the birthing seromony Kagome should turn into a FULL INU-YOUKAI,and HALF MIKO I know how can some one be full somthing and half a nother but...it's just an IDEA! AND that she transforms into a huge DOG like seshy did when he lost his left arm...OH AND ABOUT THAT ARM! I think that you should also make it so that when the baby is born he gets his arm back! HUH WHAT DO YA THINK BOUT THAT? HMM HMMMM...? And kagome should live for a VARY LONG TIME and she gets to have MANY children and she gets to meet her family again! and she has a family "reunion" where she rounds up HER children along with their childre and so on and waits for her mom, gramps, and sota to come home while waiting in her house that would be SO cool!
NE HOWS I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UP-DATE SOON!

TTFN;
megan
person Xenia
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. unfortunately i dont see the final chapter....hope you write.
person Wolf
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and i can't wait til you can update again. it's a wonderful fic and goes beyond entrancing. please keep up the good job and update as soon as you can. bye for now and good luck.
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been such a great story so far! I love it! I usually avoid the switching bodies stories, because, well, most are a little silly, but this was the exception to the rule. You made it believable and you kept the characters very close to true. You do a great Inuyasha, by the way. Not everyone does him right, but you've got him down pat. I love Sesshomaru's new found passion for Kagome, and her growing feelings for him. Kikyo is a little on the evil side, but she makes a pretty good bad guy, or girl. The humor is great, the sexual tension is stimulating and the action has been exciting. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter to find out what has happened to everyone.

Rinseternalsoul