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[Insert fangirl squeal of delight here) Absolutely delicious!! I loved it. A very interesting - and in character even - twist on a 'body swap' story. Excellent pacing, it made the story easy to get lost in while still keeping things slow enough to keep it from becoming beyond belief. I really liked watching how Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship changed slowly without immediately alienating Inu Yasha from the equation. I also liked how you handled Kikyo's character it isn't often that a fic can convey her selfishness without turning her into a raving, Kagome hating bitch and I think the coldness worked really well. And, while to end left off at what could be a very tantalizing beginning, I really loved how you wrapped things up at the end. Excellent, excellent story!

your fic was amazing I love your style of writing and how you stayed true to the characters natures XD

'm SO In Love With This Fic!Even Though 'm A InuXKag Fan,I LOve SessXKag Fics,As Well.
Please,Write The Sequel Soon!!!!

amazing story!

Woof Woof! That was some story - loved the lemons and the mixture of humor and action. Love all your stories!

Hope you don't mind, but I normally review at the very end of the story... In any case, let me begin with this: Wow. Not only was the story line wonderful, but your characters were spot on (in my opinion at least). Your story just went from one point to another so smoothly, that any snags there may have been in your story were easily overlooked. Two thumbs up on your Kagome and Inuyasha angst. I've found that only well gifted authors can actually make a reader feel Kagome's inner turmoil, especially when she goes through the process of death and rebirth, and Inuyasha's struggle in keeping up with his promises to both Kikyo and Kagome. There was a good balance of pain, sadness, confusion and resignation between the two that, in my opinion, is necessary in any Sessh/Kag fic. Too little pain and false hope in Kagome's part only fails in upholding her characterisation of being generous, kind-hearthed, and seeing the good in everyone. Not that I like seeing Kagome suffering, since too much in a fic can be really hard to swallow (and it would just ruin my day since it'll depress me greatly), but it was her first love and letting go in order to move on is a hard process. Added to that is unconscious betrayal by Inyasha in refusing to let Kikyo go while trying to get Kagome's affection as well. And Inuyasha, his inability to see past his anger and insecurities and recognize that he already lost both. But I'm rambling... Great, wonderful and fantastic work! ^^

Loved the story, and the way you described sesshomaru's home seems much more authentic and in-story than any others that I've read. It's very plausible. I can't wait for the sequel!! Please write more awsome sess/kag! Thanks

..................... I just have to get something off my chest. Normally, I hate smut. Normally, I get that weird feeling that I’m a little kid sneaking into a cookie jar when my moms right behind me, and if encountered, said smut gets clicked away. But then, at ten at night, I decide to go to a single spark, because I like the humor and fluff awards. While looking about I see 'Darkness', and I'm weird, so the title alone made me click on it, because Darkness is a very cool word to me. I begin to read.... unaware of what’s going to happen(I’m bad, I never read the author note thing at the top) I start laughing - yes out loud, alone, I'm a freak - and I’m hooked, so that when I see the smut coming I shrug, and figure I’m an adult, I can handle it.

Well then it ends. And then the sequel also ends... and I panic. I'm an idiot(already clicked the big red ‘X’) so I forget where I found the story(no internet history thing, cause my internet is hell) and google tells me to go to MM....whenever I type in your name on MM, it doesn’t come up. So I hunt. I find your profile, finally, and I read it all, then this. It is currently 2:58 AM, and I’ve just finished this fic....

I couldn’t stop! You're are insane! If I had a basement, I would hunt yo down, using ductape as my main means to kidnap, throw you into said basement and force you to write! I am flipping out, and I just wanted you to know I went through hell finding your account on websites, and I am seeing double of my evil little china doll figures because sleep deprivation makes me go insane! I mean, you're work has smut undertones, not smut plot (mostly) and I’m obsessed! It's crazy!

Every so often I find a story I save under favorites because it's good enough to be it's own story, not some crummy spoof of the show, but a real, amazing, story with amazing plot and characters! So... I just thought you might like to know, in my insanely long and ranting review, that I bow to you. I bow so deeply I actually emerge in Japan, see a picture of Kagome and inuyasha, and declare Sesshomaru should take his place.

*Sniff* I must go... I need sleep.... and a life.. a life would be good.... *bows*

This fantastic story had me hooked from word one. Beautifully written, with the perfect balance of romance, angst, drama, action, and tasteful written erotica to make this story truly unique. I do hope you decide to do a sequel, as this story is just too good to end! Bravo!

No!!! Please write a sequal! I really liked this story! If you do, please tell me! It was so good!!! Oh, and I love how when you described Kagome not going back to the future and not being able to see the sequal to Underworld! That was a cute touch!!! Hehe!