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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job on Sesshoumaru's character! I think Inuyasha's comment on his brother while out was amusing. I am really looking forward to the next chapters, so please update soon. Happy Holidays!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great start! please continue!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great pairing, i wonder how you will deal w/ kagome... ;) yey for updates!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean. It's the same with me, and if I can't find anything wrong with it at first glance, I'll scoure through it until I do! It's a bad little habit of mine, but it seems to keep whatever force in me that's so desperate for imperfection within myself at bay, so...
Anyway, I loved this chapter too, and it's great that you updated so quickly (and that you responded individually-- most authors don't do that...) I hope you can pound another one out sometime soon cause this is truly great!
Anyway, I loved this chapter too, and it's great that you updated so quickly (and that you responded individually-- most authors don't do that...) I hope you can pound another one out sometime soon cause this is truly great!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, Sesshomaru should have slashed her!
(as you can see, I really don't like Kagome!)
Anyway, other than that part (can't SOMEBODY kill her already?) I really LOVED this chapter!
(as you can see, I really don't like Kagome!)
Anyway, other than that part (can't SOMEBODY kill her already?) I really LOVED this chapter!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome.
Are you sure you've never written anything before?
^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
Are you sure you've never written anything before?
^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wickedly awsome fic! You damn well better update this soon!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really cool! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
^_^^_^! - (I Love Twins!)
^_^^_^! - (I Love Twins!)
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a first time author you're doing amazingly well. Heck, for a second time author you're doing amazingly well! This is really good writing-- you've got a good amount of detail, but not too much either. You seem to be portraying both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru quite well and already have me hooked.
I can't wait for your next update!
I can't wait for your next update!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, nice name! I don't know why but it makes me laugh! Anyway, I like the beginning so please continue and update soon! Happy Holidays!