rate_review Reviews

This is such an incredibly story! You really are a great author!

Good story but...way way way WAY too short.

ouch. now they're both screwed! hurt... out in the middle of the forest.. damn. lol, nice chapter! but short!

the graceful sesshomaru tripping and falling... what is happening there?...anyway good chapter... so what is going to happen next to Inuyasha?

I know exactly what you mean. That's why I never damn well bothered to get an account on here.

Anyway, this story is awesome-- are you really gonna make us wait till fucking monday to update? *pouts*

^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)

oo!! update soon please! I love this so far. And I like your writing syle.

" 'Besides, if I die who's going to be around to knock Sesshomaru off his high horse when his ego gets the better of him?' Obviously dying was not an option."

Hehehehehe! I really think it's as good as any reason as to why Rumiko Takahashi invented this particular pair of brothers! I couldn't stop laughing for whole ten minutes. I loved Inuyasha's monologue in this chapter, it shows more humour than angst (sorry for that, seeing you are aiming for an angst type of fiction) but please don't change it (puppy dog eyes) because I think you managed to bring out angst but with a twisted kind of humour that makes people laugh, happy and enjoy themselves. Also, thanks for one on one reply for the review and please keep up the humour in the fiction because it really makes it more enjoyable. It's really rare to find a humorous fiction in this site. So long, until next time, have a wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year!
P.S. Please, update soon (hopefully before New Year)!

o-o-okay, so far so good.

Good start & good title, I loves a good title.

Sesshy's just a big softy ain't he. sigh. I love cruelty, it's fun to read all the blood and guts.

LOL. A staring contest between Sesshy and Kagome? Waay funny!
I can see it chibified...XD