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for Camaraderie

by BlackberryPatch

person LynLin
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. I liked the end and I liked the "omake" as well. Very cute.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. The ending was touching and very, very hot. The omake was definately worth reading, too. And yes, after reading "Inglorious" I admit I felt more than a little guilty for some of the things I'd thought about putting the boys through. This story, and series, was certainly one of the jewels hidden among the inucest kingdom and I thank you from the bottom of my voyaristic heart for posting it. And another segment? *squeals*

Thank you so much and I look forward to reading more of your work,
~Silence~
person gogochan
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH!!!! This is so so so so so great. You are such an awesome writer and I have loved your fics. And, from this Omake, it sounds like their might be a continuation? Perhaps Inu will finally say "I love you"??? And was that a mating mark Sesshy just bit into his shoulder? Please keep writing. It was such a treat today to read this. I've read Fraternal and Camraderie so many times now. Can't wait for what you have next for these two hottie brothers (Just hope it all works out in the end).
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is the story over or is there more? I hope there's more it really goood.
person Polka dot
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so there's a sequel to this: nnniiiiiiiccccccccceeee
person gen
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for a second there i didnt know what chapter was new.. unlike in mm, you immediately know which chapter
chapter 11 ended it. i was hoping more sess and inu goodness but you up and ended it....
still, the omake (which i didnt understand very well as it seem to be containing private jokes to certain readers) did say a sequel.

i considered your entire trilogy as one fic.
inglorious set up the 2 brothers
fraternal moved them to join
and comaraderie moved them to be two - hence it ended with just the 2 of them

i didnt expect rin to be removed from sess, nor shippou from inuyasha
i mean shippou needs to be with a demon - since he is one - he needs training

at any rate i am much pleased that there will be more. i have to go post to my lj that you have an update
so snow can check ths out...

i thought the ending was sad. but then goodbyes always are....
person Vague
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person gen
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i read it again. it was good to see naraku die again.
actually i read the entire thing again, thought i would
it was nice of you to update....

person memorietrail
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope there is more soon
person gen
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naraku is dead!! that phrase feels me with deep relief... and the only regrets i have is that his death wasnt as painful as i'd like it to be.

thank you for continuing this story. i knew if i waited i wouldnt regret it.
hopefully the next chapter you go back to sess and inu? ..... or at least some scenes being together,
if not lemonish... it doesnt matter...