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for Shell

by Atsusa

person kagss
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was weird!!! Very ingeniour and original but weird!!! I really like it, keep on updating it`s reeeaalllyyy goood, can´t wait to see where this one is going!!! great work!
person icyvsfrost
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please. Also does inuyasha's shell look like kagome?
person Hannah
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story with it's sci-fi sense to it!!!
person TheSoulmater
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is such a cool and original idea, I really love it, hope you update soon! I really liked how Kagome's dad made the shells, is that a key part to the plot, like the first shell being based on her or was it just meant to be funny, (just wondering if so is the first shell going to be kikyo or am I like waaaay of here? lol!)

Holly

XXX
person sennin
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Keep going.
person Twilight
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better and better please write more
person Amy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far! I'd work on maybe not making it look like one big blob of words though. Separate the paragraphs with a space or something, cause usually stories that look like one big paragraph scare me away... haha. In this case it didn't, but whatever. Otherwise, it's an interesting idea! Can't wait for the next update! ^_^
person Rei
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW THIS IS A GOOD STORY I LIKE THE PLOT LINE TEHEHE WRITE MORE PLEASE AND CAN YOU PLEASE EMAIL ME WITH THE TITLE WHEN YOU UPDATE? WELL SEE YOU LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
person Conservgurl
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is so original! Keep up the good work!!
person D.I.
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Interesting.
I'm hoping to see more chapters of this story because it is so original and no story is like it! Please update soon and don't let flames or no reviewing put you down. You're a very talented writer. Keep up the great work.